My mood board of the first ideas that come to my head when I think of thriller/horror.
First Ideas: Mind map
Idea 4. Another idea could be to do with social media like Skype or facetime. You in your room on facetime/Skype to your friend when it starts going fuzzy and starts loosing connection. You then hear a voice saying 'I SEE YOU', you think its your friend messing around with you so your laughing until you hear a 'SCREAM' your then really worrid about whats going on. You try call her,her phones off, you then decide to go to her house, her house is on fire and burning to the ground. I WONDER WHO IT WAS WHO DONE THIS?
Unfriended is a film that i have choose that will help with my work and come up with ideas that will create my 1 minute short film.
From thinking about some of these ideas i'm thinking to mix some together and see what will work, and create a good horror film.
For example I like idea 2 and 4 could go together because you could be out with your mates, you see then wanted boys, you go home all go on Skype together and this unwanted call comes in you all try to ignore it and it still gets accepted by someone and no one will admit who done it, it ends up being them boys threatening them, and telling them they cant tell no one they saw them. But one of the girls screams for help but before anyone came, she was killed.... This idea is going to use alternative techniques such as a linear narrative. Using a Linear narrative can still can create suspense throughout my short film.
Location-In a house, either on a bed or the sofa on facetime/skype
Mise en scene- phone(facetime), laptop (skype), drinks, seats
Editing-loads of shaking of the camera when looking at the boys are on skype, close up of girls faces.
Camera- Close ups, high angles making them looks small
My Pitch-
My pitch is going to go on for 1 minute, this where i'm going to talk about my ideas on my short film.
2 girls are on facetime to eachother both having a conversation. Having a normal conversation and then one of them gets annoyed that they have invited someone over and not telling her. However the girl denies saying there is no one is there, the girls sees him in facetime and says she is lying however the girl gets up to have a look around, then gets taken by someone this unknown person in the house. The girl runs away screaming for help sudennly hears her door bell ring. She walks over thinking the its someone ,opens it to see her friend standing there with blood all over her and a knife in her hand.
Script
This is my script for my short film. To be honest i will not follow it word from as it might not fit in to the way i film my short film or it might change a little bit.
INTRO- Sam and laura are on facetime to eachother sitting on their own beds
Sam- 'Hey Laura so imagine what happened today i bumped into today that boy who helped me with choose them trainers
Laura- 'OMG did you'
Sam- 'Yeah, but whos that behind you?'
Laura- 'Noone why?' (turns around to have a look)
Sam- ' NO look behind you theres someone there staring at you' (man walks away behind the door)
Laura- 'Are you sure?' (gets up walks out her room to have a look)
HEAR SCREAM
Sam- 'Lauraaaaaaa!!!'
Sam is getting worried doesnt no what to do, she trys finding the phone to ring the police but is shaking to much to find it or have look
*KNOCK KNOCK AT THE DOOR*
Sam is wondering who it is and why they are knocking so early in morning.
*OPENS THE DOOR*
SCREAMS!!
Laura- ' Hi Sam' (standing at the door with blood all over her)
NYA
ReplyDeleteWT P
The portfolio is not organised and is difficult to assess in its presentation
You need to separarte this out into the tasks
Primary research
Secondary resesarach - broken down by category ie funding etc
There are still areas that have bnot been highlight and the full link to the resource is not posted.
The last article is all annotated - only the relevant part ought to be
There is no annotation to explain why this is relevant or will impact on your idea - or even describing what the article etc is.
Your target audience research need some factual proof that the audience for short films is 15 - they clearly are not - look at the age of the actors for a start!
Look on imdb or the social networks for their profiles
You need more sources such a videos and articles - where is your research into Real Events or short stories etc?